This is where you will post a picture of yourself, a brief description of who you are, and upload your essay.
Great start, just elaborate more details on your points and you'll be golden
Great use of counter arguments throughout the paper; however, the conclusion could be expanded upon. Also when talking about making the weight room bigger perhaps make a suggestion on how to do so in a cost effective manner. The section on improving the weight room's aesthetic could use a little more substance.
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.